📝 Part 1: Giving Constructive Feedback

Author's name: ___________________ Draft title: ___________________

1. What words or phrases caught your attention? Why did they stand out?

2. Who do you think the intended audience is for this writing?

Young people/peers

Adults/teachers

General public

Other: _______________

3. Circle the tone that best describes this writing:

Formal Informal Persuasive Friendly Serious

4. Identify any confusing parts or sentences. Write the line and explain why it's unclear:

5. Suggest ONE specific way the writer could improve clarity or tone:

I think you could ________________________________________________

because _______________________________________________________

✨ Part 2: Strengths and Suggestions

6. What is the strongest part of this draft? Be specific:

7. Which language choices work well for the intended audience?

Word choice is appropriate for the audience

Sentence length suits the purpose

Tone matches the writing goal

Ideas are clearly expressed

8. Complete this feedback statement:

Your writing would have even more impact if you ________________________

9. What feedback did you receive about your own writing?

10. Based on the feedback, write TWO specific revision goals:

Goal 1: I will _____________________________________________

Goal 2: I will _____________________________________________

11. How did giving feedback to someone else help you think about your own writing?